Inspired by Face by Nu'est. In this song there's a lot of hope that things will be righted, and despite a happy resolution being met in the lyrics, I still feel that there fear and anguish linger from the dark electric beat. I thought a relationship would be best to show this since emotions are always so poignant, but it couldn't be just any stereotypical relationship.
How well has the setting been set?
Any awkward expressions?
Is the conclusion satisfactory, especially that last sentence?
Critique on Lies by ~talkin-silence [link]
Written 12/1/13, edited 26/1/2013 and 27/1/2013.