Edit: omg, a DLD!! Right at this [link]
!! Never would've expected it with a piece that I'd considered experimental!!
In the Lai Nouveau form as required for Day 18 of [link]
I found this form much harder to adhere to with the combination of a strict syllable count, rhyming scheme and repetition of the very first two lines.
About the lai nouveau. Taken from [link]
an octave, 8 lines made up of 2 tercets followed by a rhymed couplet.
syllabic, syllables per line, 5-5-2-5-5-2-5-5.
rhymed aabaabaa Questions
Is there any meaning that you can draw from this? I feel that it seems like nonsense in some parts.
How well have I adhered to the rules of the form?
Any other comments?
I like the images of the piece and later I'll rework it into a free verse. I'm sure I'll improve it, because appropriating my own work seems to do so.