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Within blue eyes
anemone and starfish
abound, and seaweed eyelashes
move leisurely with the tides.
At sunset they sparkle,
lined with golden sand
and swirling without a sure direction,
becoming cloudy as a storm brews.
Beware, anger flashes across the surface,
where riptides catch the unwary
ships and sailors, wrecked
and broken amongst its depths.
Only the brave venture in,
attracted by the untameable,
roaring waves and sharp wind.
Eyes stinging, they enter the battle.
Slowly they themselves become blue,
the cold clinging to their skin,
sucking out all their warmth.
Then white as stone,
lips cracked and filled with salt
that leaves a bitter aftertaste.
Yet, they couldn't feel more alive.
Its only when battered and bruised,
beating back her worst,
do they wear their triumphant smiles.
Hooray, I've gotten up my first piece for April! It's been sitting in the shadows of sta.sh for a while, and what better than NaPoWriMo to motivate me to polish it up a bit more? 
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TheMaidenInBlack's avatar
Woo, first April poem! :dummy: I really like what you did with this.

Are "anemone" and "starfish" words spelled the same in singular and plural? It felt rather weird to see them singular, considering the context.

And, are you doing NaPoWriMo? :D